上海初中英语各区一模，二模考，中考作文大多数都要求写相关具体事例+感受/体会。以2021年二模为例：

黄浦区：

闵行区：

静安区：

浦东新区：

普陀区：

写作角度：

1. 从第三者（事， 人， 物）对你产生的影响：（给你带来什么，使你变得怎么样）

It enables me to ~

It allows me to ~        (让某人做某事不要用make和let, 用enable, allow

sth is of a great help to

It encourages me to ~

With his support/help, I would never fear any difficulties.

2. 对生活、学习的启发：

可用句式：only by doing sth, can we do sth( 倒装）

只有通过做… ， 我们才能…

as long as …只要…

no matter when 无论何时/ no matter where 无论在哪里 / no matter how 无论如何 +句子， I will~

例：Life is full  of ups and downs, however, as long as we stick to our goals, we can finally succeed.

（坚持：continue doing sth / keep doing sth/ stick to sth/ stick to doing sth/ persist in doing sth—高中）

No matter how challenging it is , I will never lose hope and keep

doing my best.

3. 从自己的角度： （我以后要怎么样， 我意识到…）：

可用句式：I realize that+句子

I was aware of +n

I was aware of +句子

I believe that+句子

I began to know / understand+ 句子

I hope/ wish +句子

例：我以后坚持做好垃圾分类（sorting rubbish) ， 为美好环境做努力：

I will stick to the work of sorting rubbish and make some efforts to a better environment.